Sunday, June 3, 2012

Why I Proofread My Manuscripts So Many Times (#1)

Sentence just adjusted in the first draft of The (Dis)Appearance of Nerissa MacKay:

"All in all, he was not a bad option at all."

5 comments:

  1. All those alls make all good all those proofreadings.

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  2. Nice spot.

    p.s. You haven't claimed you prize yet.

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    1. Oh! I'd forgotten. Sorry. It's been an insanely busy week.

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    2. As you're a good teacher I'll let you off. ;)

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