Sunday, August 26, 2012

Why I Proofread My Manuscripts So Many Times (#4)

So, I'm making what I sincerely hope are the FINAL edits on All in the Half-Vampire Family, and I find this line:

I stared back at the curtains.

This implies that the curtains were 1) sentient and 2) staring at Eric first.
That's a bit creepier than this scene was intended.
It's fixed now.


  1. No wonder I always feel like I'm being watched! Stupid sentient spying curtains. I'm switching to shades this week.

  2. Haha @ Max!
    What did you change it to??