Sunday, August 26, 2012

Why I Proofread My Manuscripts So Many Times (#4)

So, I'm making what I sincerely hope are the FINAL edits on All in the Half-Vampire Family, and I find this line:


I stared back at the curtains.



This implies that the curtains were 1) sentient and 2) staring at Eric first.
That's a bit creepier than this scene was intended.
It's fixed now.
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  1. Max SartinAugust 26, 2012 at 4:28 PM

    No wonder I always feel like I'm being watched! Stupid sentient spying curtains. I'm switching to shades this week.

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  2. AlexiaAugust 26, 2012 at 10:44 PM

    Haha @ Max!
    What did you change it to??

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